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[ river ] Lesson Plan One: From Journal to Poetry—Writing the List Poem

Where do poems begin? With the eyes, the ears, the hand, and the heart. Poets don't wait for inspiration; they find inspiration through their explorations of the world around them. Many begin with the journal: their hand-written recordings of what they see and hear and feel. These raw observations then become the fodder for their poems. [ river scene ]

In this lesson, your students will explore a favorite nature spot, preferably one with water, in which they and other living beings co-exist, and create a journal of their observations, modeled after the journals of John Wesley Powell who explored the then unknown Colorado River in l800’s and published his journals as the wildly popular Exploration of the Colorado River of the West and its Tributaries in 1869.

Your students' journals will become the basis of their first poems. By comparing and contrasting Powell's journal selections with Walt Whitman's poem, There Was a Child Went Forth (1890), they will discover the transforming elements of poetry--what can distinguish poetry from prose. Then using their journal observations, they will compose a type of poem called the list poem, modeling theirs after Whitman's poem, and focusing on using concrete specific language, the names of things that they have discovered in their biosphere exploration, and formal elements of the list poem such as repetition, rhythm, and sound patterns.

As part of the science extension activities, your students will also be provided with ecological terms and definitions to further describe their experience outdoors. Field guides can assist them in identifying what they see.

Underlying your neighborhood is a living ecosystem known as a bioregion. Bioregions are defined by landforms, distinct communities of plants and animals, and a degree of biological self sustainability. Watersheds (http://www.riverofwords.org/youth/watershed.html) are a vital component of your bioregion. Student journals will record their exploration of their bioregion and include both a hand-drawn map of a specific location in their watershed and written observations.

musical noteBut before you delve into the Resources and Assignments for the List Poem, take a moment and listen to Walt Whitman reading from his poem "America," courtesy of The Walt Whitman Archive.



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